Arcerion's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[New Beginning]

Nice, but repetitive, would've liked some cinematic drums in there, but oh well.
Either way, instruments and melodies are great, well done there.

[BloødStëp - GOAT [Riddim Dubstep]]

Nice, decent riddim track.
However I feel like the drop could have been more unique and varying than it was.
Also, the song is clipping a lot, so do try and mix down your track to avoid that.
Otherwise, well done, seems like your average riddim.

[Pichuscute - Softly]

Nice!
Great atmosphere and melodics, would definitely listen again.

pichuscute0 responds:

Thank you!

[Last Flight]

This is nice!
However, I feel like it's very repetitive and the tune didn't really go anywhere.
I also feel like the snare isn't really fitting with the rest of the genre.
However, the sound design and melodies are super emotional and enchanting, well done, but just some minor details are keeping it from shining.

Axepecticle responds:

Hello, thanks for your review. I agree with you, but I must add one thing. I am using this melody for one project and it needs to be looped, so this is not my best work. :)

[Carousel]

Nice synthwave atmosphere.
I feel like it would sound better if the chords were tuned down about an octave
Also, try and give it more elements and make the drums more complicated.
Otherwise, great ideas in here, just tweak it a bit :)

Oddyan responds:

Thank you very much for leaving your review! I am very pleased

[Chaotic Choice]

this is pretty nice, bass is absolute 🔥🔥🔥

However, try and make the lead more synced and complex.
Additionally, I feel like there's way too much reverb, try toning that down a little bit.
There are a lot of good elements in this song, but it needs some minor tweaks to shine!
Well done overall :)

Nayster25 responds:

Man thank you for listening appreciate it 🤘 Lead probably doesn't sound complex or synced because I free hand it all the way to the end and build upon it the reverb and echo effect I can definitely tweak and sort out thank you for the feedback man not many people give it me on the other sites I post these on 🤘

[2]

This is pretty cool, lots of emotion.
I feel like the acid basses don't really fit with the progressive house drops, though.
Also, I feel like the drums are louder than needed, and kind of affects the drops especially.
All in all, great track, very emotional, would definitely listen again :)

HydraeXeF responds:

Thank you for your comments !
It was composed in December 2019 and i also very ashamed to listen it again recently😅
THX :)

[Nostalgia]

This has some good melodies.
However, it seems very empty and some parts are quite simplistic. Try and add more atmosphere & some reverb on the beginning piano so it doesn't immediately drop off when it's over.
However, this has a lot of emotion in it, I can see potential here.
Wishing you luck on future tracks :)

GamerPrinceMusic responds:

Thanks for your comment! I'm very glad that you would like be the first one to listen for it and comment!
First, I made it in a few hours. Secondly, I am very very bad at mixing. I can't use the tools for mixing flexibly. That's why I'm very proud of some producers like Creo and MDK and so on.
Anyways, you are the first person to comment my music. So huge THANKS! I'll try my best in the future!

[Kanna's Shop]

🔥🔥🔥

[Ocsid]

I enjoyed listening to this track, but it appears to build up at the very end, then it just drops off. This usually makes listeners have a feeling of anticlimax and I'd try and avoid that.
Otherwise, great sound design and melodics, well done :)

miwafoxl responds:

thank you :)
sorry for dropping off at the end haha