very repetitive for 13 minutes, I'd add the typical elements of intro break build drop break build drop break outro, but just make them longer sections--
The kick/snare thing (not really sure which..?) clips a little bit so maybe make that quieter.
Interesting idea but needs more variety
Pretty cool!
A lot of high end in the beginning, try toning down that, maybe make the arp thingy quieter
drop has really good flow, needs a chonkier sub but has interesting sounds
the chords in the break after the drop are off beat and makes the song sound uncomfortable, maybe just make the chords repeat every two steps or something like that
Next drop is nice but I would've preferred it if you extended the first section instead of adding the first drop after it
ending is nothing special, I would've added a stab of the notes in the drop to make it sound more final but that's fine
all in all, really nice flow for the most part, cool sounds, just some minor issues
Yeah, Im know there are some issues, expecially with the middle part. I had a jazz drum loop which wasnt working at 150 bpm but on 110 bpm and really wanted to make a jazz part, so I had to make a time change. I tried my best to make that sound good, but it was really harder than I thought tho :o
Thanks for your review, appreciate it bro :)
try and master your tracks quieter, they're clipping because they're too loud, esp the piano on this one :/
Can't say for sure cus I don't really uh make hyperpop but I think that it has vocals &/ vocal chops
cool sounds though, pretty catchy, just needs touching up
tbh i know that as well, i noticed that everysince i finished working on that song lol
tho i dont plan fixing it anymore
i agree with your opinion
pretty nice, the heavily distorted kick is an interesting touch, gives hyperpop vibes
one criticism I have is that when you play the kick in 16th notes (first happens around 0:45ish) the kick's tail is really long, so maybe make it shorter, that'll probably make it hit harder as well as clean it up-
Otherwise sounds pretty cool, the lead could be a little quieter but put together pretty well overall, will be interested to see what you make itf ^^
Thank for liking it! and also yeah thanks for the tip, as you may have or havent noticed, i am pretty much an amateur when it comes to the hyperpop or kawaiifuturebass genre, so yea :/
srsly tho thanks for the tip, i really needed it :))
nice track ^^
feel like some of the dubstepish fills in the drop section don't really fit & are too loud
also feels like there isn't enough of a break, too much drop, in my opinion.
but the mix is good and has good sound design, well done
Thank you very much for the feedback!
those drum fills are sick
you should try making some midtempo / dark synthwave, that'd be sick
panda eyes, making slap house??
I must be dreaming.
Please put on spotify please please please
80s type beat for sure
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