Arcerion's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ethan Forster - Slaughter]

the sidechain is really heavy and it clips a lot, try making the mix quieter, especially the drums

otherwise, good work =w=

EthanFirith responds:

thanks! im a begginer when it comes to music making, hehe TwT

[C̷o̷s̷m̷i̷c̷ H̷a̷n̷d̷]

excellent work, I feel like this is a little fast for psytrance though
vocals are cool, but you could've done some cool chopping and things before the drop to give it some extra flavor
either way, always great to see you upload again ^^

VariableGR responds:

Thanks kid (◠‿・)—☆

[Swear Jar]

made me laugh, but the shouting seemed a little forced and restrained

CIEIRMusic responds:

Thanks. The reason why it's restrained was because the character I was playing was trying to hold himself back. You know fighting between having to let loose and to pay another dollar. Funny I was more worried that people noticed me flubbing a line than the screaming.

[Diet Standup]

lmaooo you're pretty good not gonna lie

CIEIRMusic responds:

Thanks. Funny enough the idea only started with the Shatner Joke, but I figured to be a standup even if it's for 5 minutes you have to get in as many jokes as possible.

[Focus]

No words 🔥

Vexilion responds:

I have two words for you though, thank you!

[The Mantis Relic]

Different than usual..!
If this is for NGUAC2021, good luck :)

VariableGR responds:

Thanks bro <3

[Pichuscute - Softly]

Nice!
Great atmosphere and melodics, would definitely listen again.

pichuscute0 responds:

Thank you!

[Last Flight]

This is nice!
However, I feel like it's very repetitive and the tune didn't really go anywhere.
I also feel like the snare isn't really fitting with the rest of the genre.
However, the sound design and melodies are super emotional and enchanting, well done, but just some minor details are keeping it from shining.

Axepecticle responds:

Hello, thanks for your review. I agree with you, but I must add one thing. I am using this melody for one project and it needs to be looped, so this is not my best work. :)

[Carousel]

Nice synthwave atmosphere.
I feel like it would sound better if the chords were tuned down about an octave
Also, try and give it more elements and make the drums more complicated.
Otherwise, great ideas in here, just tweak it a bit :)

Oddyan responds:

Thank you very much for leaving your review! I am very pleased

[Chaotic Choice]

this is pretty nice, bass is absolute 🔥🔥🔥

However, try and make the lead more synced and complex.
Additionally, I feel like there's way too much reverb, try toning that down a little bit.
There are a lot of good elements in this song, but it needs some minor tweaks to shine!
Well done overall :)

Nayster25 responds:

Man thank you for listening appreciate it 🤘 Lead probably doesn't sound complex or synced because I free hand it all the way to the end and build upon it the reverb and echo effect I can definitely tweak and sort out thank you for the feedback man not many people give it me on the other sites I post these on 🤘